Week 5 Monday

Today we had a lot of one on one time to see how we are progressing. I feel I am in quite a good place at the moment. The shells on my beach collage create a bit of a visual wall that's not very pleasing to look at but other than that my collages are pretty set. My type is a good size, spacing etc. My heading font looks a little cliche and I could change it to something a bit more modern. I need to work on my map and front cover more. I am using a lot of the red and green colour theme from the botanical garden date spread. This flows well until the final 2 spreads which look a bit out of place. To fix this I could incorporate the other colours from the other 2 spreads in the rest of the brochure.