Week 3 Thursday

Today we had a critique on our first layouts. I need to make my collage have less white space and change the text columns so that it does not look like one big block in the middle of the page like a sandwich. I also need to make the two pages flow better by bringing aspects of the image onto the text side of the page. I think more colour should be added so it grabs the attention of the reader. I think my title should stand out a bit more, I could increase the size. The actual image needs to be a lot larger so the detail can be seen when it is printed out.